InsaneJournal

the bliss!
I solved my synopsis problem! By making things simpler.

I was too caught up in being all "they think this but it's really that and somehow this one has to get this information from someone who is in another place--" No. Put the two people in the same place. One of them is infatuted with the other. Of course he will go to see her, even if he's not supposed to. And behold--a plausible synopsis!